Momma's Gone

To my mom, I miss you.

Gone in the wind 

a whisper in the dark,

a picture on my wall

a tear from my heart.

The words she wrote

linger in ink,

clinging to my heart

and making me think.

I miss her hug

I miss her voice,

I miss her love

I hate God's choice.

She was my mother

my life's companion,

I miss her now

and the relationship that had been.

Day in and day out

I sit and I cry,

wondering this

oh why God why?

Gone in the wind 

a whisper in the dark,

a picture on my wall

a tear from my heart.

I miss my mom.

Reviews

[FireFly15]

So sad, and very passionate. Once again, Wonderful job.

100/100

[Scarlet Pulse]

I am so sorry for your loss. I cannot imagine how you feel! This poem is very touching and emotional. It is written very well, and it is a wonderful piece of writing.

[Mistaken]

My heart goes out to you and what you've been through...though God isn't the one to blame (not saying you do). Everything happens for a reason..fate has plans for us in which we won't understand until later.

Great piece I loved it

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was really sad and this makes me feel bad for you. I wish you were with your Mom...this was a good write. Thanks for sharing. :)

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

This is really good, really sad as well.

[YourXArtist]

wow. this is very sad but a good write, this is exactly how i've felt also and,. i'm sorry :(

[Theresa]

I could feel your pain in each word, each line and each stanza. It is probably the hardest thing that you will ever have to go through. I have no words at least any that are worthy enough. So I'm just going to say that this is a beautiful piece and you are very talented. Stay strong and keep writing.

[Katie]

I can literally feel the love pouring out of this piece. She would be very proud of you, sometimes God does things we have to question- and I love that part of this piece. Great job.

[Senseless whatever]

Powerful emotional write.

[Valentine]

Such sweetness and love in this poem..I lost both of my parents and still miss them every day..It eases with time honey...but the missing is there only somewhat less each year..lol and God bless..Valentien