Little Red Bicycles and Red Tambourines

Trying something different.. This is what happens when you live in the country for a while.

Little red bicycles 

and red tambourines,

the sounds of her laughing 

is all that truly means. 

Cause it's always a good night

out in the country side,

on that little red bicycle 

out for a star light ride. 

Fireflies would dance

and crickets would sing,

the guitar would play 

that old harmonic hymn.

There are no signs to slow us down

no lights to block the stars,

we're out here to live this very night

not trapped inside life's bars. 

The country is our home

where the night time likes to sing,

where our heart can soar above

above all other things.

Little red bicycles 

and red tambourines,

the sound of her laughing 

is all that truly means. 

Author's Note

To my new cousin

Reviews

[Glen's not so clean sla..]

A stunning piece of writing if I do say so myself. Enjoyed greatly. "the guiatr would play that old harmonic hymn" is strong! Feel free to check out my work 'jillian' if you want on the sane subject matter 😉

[Moonflower]

This was heartfelt and sweet. Reminds me of my childhood in the country. Very nice ;)

[Chelsea.]

Nice :) ,
Very Calming.

[Jane Doe]

its beautiful
i luv it
a litlle better than ur dr.seus attempt:P
but i liked em both
i luv it
luv ya
-sugar dumpling muffin baby pumpkin pie:)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this is a cute poem. I think this was nicely written. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Tate Morgan]

THis one
Fireflies would dance
and crickets would sing,
the guitar would play
that old harmonic hymn.
The rhyme is off
this one
The country is our home
where the night time likes to sing,
where our heart can soar above
above all other things.
One rhyme singular as in sing one plural as in things
A fun write i liked it

[Liza]

excellent job in imagery and painting the picture of happiness, joy and fun

[Lilly]

Cute images here - it reads / flows very well - lovely poem

[Erin_is_peace]

I like how you put the setting into place with the crickets and all. I wanted to experance that night you described. Nice work!

[Senseless whatever]

Good write. It flows well and the rhyming works..