Written While High

The world of music, high... I was listening to my music after i got completely ripped, and I went places with it.. And with each song, a different place and feeling. It was like I was actually there.

Floating down a small tropical channel

a Chinese river man plays to me, 

through the Egyptian trials

of this sitar thing.

     -SILENCE-

Riding on a wild rhino 

through African bush I go,

zebra's on our tail

when I land in a raving bar.

     -SILENCE- 

Coasting through Chicago roads

through the black abyss,

running from the lights of home

screaming 18 and life to go. 

     -SILENCE-

Through the Canadian trailer parks

to jump in raging water,

in the kayak I scream down

on the beach I blare my skill.

     -SILENCE-

In a London country home 

three rodents sing to me,

fucked on coke and helium 

through the snow they sing.

     -SILENCE-

Running through the Scottish fields 

my hand in the cookie jar,

the millers daughter standing there

laughing while I run.

     -SILENCE-

Beaming down a California boardwalk

a 40 in my hand,

cali girls hit the bong

as we ride off into tomorrow.

     -SILENCE-

Author's Note

I don't want anyone telling me not to smoke pot. If you don't like it, fine, then don't do it.. But don't be telling me how to live my life. Because I will tell you when 420 comes around each year, thats the best fuckin day of my life!!

Reviews

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

This is amazing; so imaginative. When I read this I can imagine what you must have seen, and that sounds pretty much awesome :)

[Rainey]

I love your imagination in this poem. It's so... brilliant :)
nice write ^.^

[Scarlet Pulse]

This was really interesting. I think it is creative in many ways. I liked how you incorporated different places of the world and there are many examples of imagery in this poem. I really enjoyed it and I think it's pretty cool.

[Dokuro-chan (Toeto-chan..]

Ehh this was good I guess. :)

[Undying Glory]

really intriguing write, and you're definitely right, music takes you places and sets your mood. awesome

[Maria F. Rojas]

lol, feel ya. nice writing :)