Forget

Drops of blood 

replace my tears,

from all this s**t 

from all these years.

For all I want 

is to forget my past,

but as much as I try

it always lasts.

Forget the pain 

of slitting wrists,

forget the mess

from bloody fists.

Forget the lows

from all the highs,

forget the shame 

from blood shot eyes. 

Forget the stress

since last December,

forget how I hate

with all I remember. 

Reviews

[Erin_is_peace]

Sounds like there's a lot of past that has had it's payments. I used to do the hole cutting thing but gave up on it. I didn't see the point anymore. I hope that don't do this still.

[Vanessa]

AMAZING, well written

[A Stranger's Tale]

f*****g brilliant.

[Rainey]

I love the rhyme scheme of this poem. It's excellently written, and is so sadly passionate.
Excellent write

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was well written. I liked the rhyme scheme. Good job. Well done. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I liked it, very well written :)

[Valentine]

Whew, strong thoughts are going through this head of mine..I hope this is not about you..Life is good if we let it be...lol abnd God bless..Valentine

[Jaded rose]

Enjoyed...powerful.

[jen]

a hopeful poem about not giving into our darker sides (for too long) and to just keep going and growing..i really like it.. good job :)

[Alex W]

Not bad at all :-)