Your Song
A Poem by
LivingDeath
Theres a link to this with music and vocals in my Bio on my profile page.
Your blue eyes shine
in the candle light,
they look at me
with more than sight.
You look in me
through skin and bone,
into my soul
a loving tone.
(Chorus)
Your my everything
my only thing,
my dreams at night
and the morning light.
You shine on me
and I can see,
baby you and me
were meant to be.
I'll love you girl
till the day I die,
when I look above
and I touch the sky.
But until that day
when I see the light,
I'll watch your eyes
in the candle light.
(Chorus)
Your my everything
my only thing,
my dreams at night
and the morning light.
You shine on me
and I can see,
baby you and me
were meant to be.
© 2010 LivingDeath
Author's Note
Theres a link to this with music and vocals in my Bio on my profile page.
Reviews
man this is really sweet work, kudos on that. excellent
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is very beautiful to read alone - so it must be even more amazing with the music. I'll go check it out.
Great work.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is very beautiful to read alone - so it must be even more amazing with the music. I'll go check it out.
Great work.
This is great! I can just imagine this as a song, I'll definitely have to listen to it to see if it is anything like I imagined it would be. The lyrics are beautiful, you really have a talent. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is great! I can just imagine this as a song, I'll definitely have to listen to it to see if it is anything like I imagined it would be. The lyrics are beautiful, you really have a talent. :)
I will have to listen as i love these lyrics very well said and written.
Chloe
Posted 14 Years Ago
I will have to listen as i love these lyrics very well said and written.
Chloe
very nice! lovely song =] i agree witth the last two comments.
Posted 14 Years Ago
very nice! lovely song =] i agree witth the last two comments.
Simple and loving it!
I agree with the last comment :)
Nice flow and write. good job
Posted 14 Years Ago
Simple and loving it!
I agree with the last comment :)
Nice flow and write. good job
really nice writing here! keep it up! the rhyming was great too..
one error i found..
"they look at me
with more then sight."
THEN should be THAN
Posted 14 Years Ago
really nice writing here! keep it up! the rhyming was great too..
one error i found..
"they look at me
with more then sight."
THEN should be THAN
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Added on May 5, 2010
Last Updated on May 6, 2010
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LivingDeath Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada
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"I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not." ~Kurt Cobain.
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