Your Song

Your Song

A Poem by LivingDeath
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Theres a link to this with music and vocals in my Bio on my profile page.

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Your blue eyes shine
in the candle light,
they look at me 
with more than sight.

You look in me
through skin and bone,
into my soul
a loving tone.

(Chorus)
Your my everything
my only thing,
my dreams at night
and the morning light.
You shine on me 
and I can see,
baby you and me 
were meant to be.

I'll love you girl
till the day I die,
when I look above
and I touch the sky.

But until that day
when I see the light,
I'll watch your eyes 
in the candle light.

(Chorus)
Your my everything
my only thing,
my dreams at night
and the morning light.
You shine on me 
and I can see,
baby you and me 
were meant to be.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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LivingDeath
Theres a link to this with music and vocals in my Bio on my profile page.

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man this is really sweet work, kudos on that. excellent

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very beautiful to read alone - so it must be even more amazing with the music. I'll go check it out.

Great work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is great! I can just imagine this as a song, I'll definitely have to listen to it to see if it is anything like I imagined it would be. The lyrics are beautiful, you really have a talent. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I will have to listen as i love these lyrics very well said and written.

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice! lovely song =] i agree witth the last two comments.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Simple and loving it!
I agree with the last comment :)
Nice flow and write. good job

Posted 14 Years Ago


really nice writing here! keep it up! the rhyming was great too..
one error i found..
"they look at me
with more then sight."

THEN should be THAN

Posted 14 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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