Your Song
A Poem by
LivingDeath
Theres a link to this with music and vocals in my Bio on my profile page.
Your blue eyes shine
in the candle light,
they look at me
with more than sight.
You look in me
through skin and bone,
into my soul
a loving tone.
(Chorus)
Your my everything
my only thing,
my dreams at night
and the morning light.
You shine on me
and I can see,
baby you and me
were meant to be.
I'll love you girl
till the day I die,
when I look above
and I touch the sky.
But until that day
when I see the light,
I'll watch your eyes
in the candle light.
(Chorus)
Your my everything
my only thing,
my dreams at night
and the morning light.
You shine on me
and I can see,
baby you and me
were meant to be.
© 2010 LivingDeath
Author's Note
Theres a link to this with music and vocals in my Bio on my profile page.
Reviews
this is great!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very well written!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very well written!
Even tho I cannot hear the song but I can imagine it in my head. Nice written!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Even tho I cannot hear the song but I can imagine it in my head. Nice written!
I liked this song. It was really great. Thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I liked this song. It was really great. Thanks for sharing. :)
Very good song/poem. This flows very smoothly and your emotion comes through in waves.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very good song/poem. This flows very smoothly and your emotion comes through in waves.
I like this poem a lot. I could feel the music in your words. The description was strong. I like the kind and gentle emotion in your words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
I like this poem a lot. I could feel the music in your words. The description was strong. I like the kind and gentle emotion in your words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
The lyric here is beautiful and tender, filled with a true sense of joy in life together. Wonderfully done!
Posted 14 Years Ago
The lyric here is beautiful and tender, filled with a true sense of joy in life together. Wonderfully done!
this is good well done
Posted 14 Years Ago
this is good well done
this is way awesome!
Posted 14 Years Ago
this is way awesome!
it was pure awsomness
Posted 14 Years Ago
it was pure awsomness
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Added on May 5, 2010
Last Updated on May 6, 2010
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LivingDeath Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada
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"I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not." ~Kurt Cobain.
Wasssup guys! I am me, if you want my name, ask me for it. Life in every breath, is my motto. 22 years old, living ..
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