Is Love A Lie?

Is Love A Lie?

A Poem by LivingDeath

I felt your lips 
upon my neck
and felt your warm embrace.

I thought if love
was really there
or if it was all a lie.

For it wouldn't be the first time
you played me on like this,
but it wouldn't be the last time
that I'd fall for it.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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;) Good Job. It a question everyone asks

Posted 14 Years Ago


once again the blind emotion leads us on, very nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very interesting word play. I really enjoyed this poem very much. A great short poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ha! Good write... Really something there I'll say... =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I say don't give up on love because you never know when you'll find that perfect person!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the ending especially. Very short & to the point- yet not lacking any substance. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


very short, very nice. i love the feeling of on-going love in the midst of doubt. i don't know how u did that but it was truly great. the last stanza was just great.. acceptance of foolishness of love. the decision to go through with it all over again, knowing that you could get hurt.
good job!!! keep it up!
NYTG

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very cool poem. Brings up the question, is love here physical of emotional? The subject seems to be searching for emotional love but willing to take it as just a physical act. Is that enough? and if not, is is worth the cost? so much in such a short poem. Great!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Happens so many times. Very nice flow and poem too.. sad , well written.

Chloe

Posted 14 Years Ago


Thought-provoking viewpoint that you have here. I like the last stanza -- it reminds me of many people who have fallen for things like this. Great job, made me think as well ;]

Posted 14 Years Ago



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LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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