Is Love A Lie?

I felt your lips 

upon my neck

and felt your warm embrace.

I thought if love

was really there

or if it was all a lie.

For it wouldn't be the first time

you played me on like this,

but it wouldn't be the last time

that I'd fall for it.

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

very well penned and deeply expressed~

Nice Job on this onE!!

Thanks for sharimg

[Sara Mercury]

In the words of someone else I know in spirit ... "My body is all you want to talk about ... I can see what you want me to be...." So sad.

[Sara Mercury]

Oh, dear. Too many times, I've been here myself. You want it to be real, but all they want is what they want you to be; not who you really are. Shame, really. Spot-on expression of that f-ing thing.

[Vanessa]

shows the reality of things!

[Rainey]

This is a very hardcore, very truthful poem. Extremely powerful with few words.

[Chelsea.]

This is sad actually. People often play upon other's emotions to get what they want and then cast you aside. You have to find the right person to share the ultimate gift of love with, for it is special. It's sad, really, how everyone now days goes around telling everyone they love with after a few days or so of dating. This shows the other end of the story, not the users, but the used. Nicely written.

[StacyPerry]

I truly enjoyed this poem as the words fell on listening ears instead of deaf ones my dear.

[Orahemae December]

omg this sums up my life perfectly rite now. and with such few words. great write.

[Missing Part]

good job. whos it about??

[Fallen Angel]

this is good and something many people can relate to