Hesitation Proclamation

There is some hesitation 

when you speak your proclamation,

of love that shows confusion

was this just a dreamed illusion.

We have such possibilities

not stopped by our inabilities,

we love with such intensity

not shunned from things not meant to be.

So don't let this end inferior 

for our love has grown superior,

I can't just wait nearby

so please don't say that last goodbye.

Author's Note

I think the last word in the last stanza is the biggest.

Reviews

[Vanessa]

its short, but really gets the message thru!

[SarahCortland]

This is like writing my feelings out. I love it! I just recently had to end a friendship because of something in this

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a great write. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Missing Part]

this is good well done

[Orahemae December]

the words are very powerful. and you're right the last line is the biggest. :) watch you punctuation though. only put commas when you would need a pause and a period at the end of a thought. read it all continuously like a paragraph instead of one line after another. just some helpful criticism to help you grow. but other than the grammar of it, the poems really great. keep writing!

[Fallen Angel]

Wow i must say i have read all your poetry and i've seen how your poetry has grown, you are becomming a great poet!

This is great. One in love starts to question the sincerity of the other. Looking from the inside. Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is strong. The conversation is very good.To hold two people together takes effort and a lot of give and take. Many lines were powerful. You are correct. Last line told the story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

Ooh, sweetheart, I can relate to this so perfectly! Its shocking! :D
Fantastic job! You're an amazing poet.

[*~Kristy~*]

I LOVE THIS! I prefer poems with a rhyming scheme that make sense, and have a good wording. It's really great!