I Am A Broken Angel

I am a broken angel 

who died from a broken heart,

nobody could save me

after I fell apart.

What used to be so perfect

now gathers dust and grime,

what used to be unbreakable 

has broken down this time.

You used to be my everything

my every breath I took,

our love was like a fantasy 

like one you'd read in a book.

Tomorrow never came for us

tomorrow just brought pain,

it broke my heart and destroyed my life

my life is now invain.

I am a broken angel 

who died from a broken heart,

nobody could save me

after I fell apart. 

Reviews

[Bette]

very sad, i liked it very much

[SarahCortland]

I love this and I always love poems that end with how they start! it always makes it come across as a story from the heart!

[MissWordSmith]

i freaking love this! the rhyming was great and the tempo was good too! also i love these lines....

What used to be so perfect
now gathers dust and grime,
what used to be unbreakable
has broken down this time.

That was like the perfect stanza. recently i lost inspiration, and i think you just inspired me again with this piece! so, thank you.

[Missing Part]

this is very good. sometimes we have to deal with broken hearts but it's not the end of the world we will always bounce back from it not matter the pain. but it wont always be right away.

[Coyote Poetry]

It feel like we have no purpose after a heart brake. A sad poem with very good movement in the words. Times teaches us to be wiser. Watch our step and know where we are going if we are smart. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this would make a great song, the flow is very good

[Senseless whatever]

Nice write. Song like. Heartbreak described so eloquently just a beautiful write.