I Am A Broken Angel

I am a broken angel 

who died from a broken heart,

nobody could save me

after I fell apart.

What used to be so perfect

now gathers dust and grime,

what used to be unbreakable 

has broken down this time.

You used to be my everything

my every breath I took,

our love was like a fantasy 

like one you'd read in a book.

Tomorrow never came for us

tomorrow just brought pain,

it broke my heart and destroyed my life

my life is now invain.

I am a broken angel 

who died from a broken heart,

nobody could save me

after I fell apart. 

Reviews

[Ivy Rose]

This was a good piece, but I must say I felt like some of it was pushed. You could have made the emotion jump out more. However, I did feel some sadness towards the angel. All in all not a bad poem.

[Vanessa]

omg i loved it! its really emotional and deep. YOURE AN AMAZING WRITER :)

[Rainey]

So extremely emotional; one line that I find really deep, but that I like is
"Tomorrow never came for us"
The emotion in this is unbelievable. I enjoyed this one alot :)

[Liza]

my heart breaks with compassion for this broken angel - may heaven renew your wings with the love that can never be completely wasted just renewed.

[Fallen Angel]

wow i could really feel the emotion and related to this perfectly! i think this is how i would feel if i ever lost my gf.. thanks for writing this!

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I love your poems. You have such a talent for capturing emotions and portraying them in a way that we can actually feel them as well. :)

[Kayla_May]

i could feel your emotions and the sadness im sorry you feel this way

[The Wave]

Not a bad read.
I understand the emotion and feeling ...but I feel this lacks depth. It was as if you were just fitting words to the same format of your other poems. I didn't actually FEEL any of your words in this.
Overall, It did evoke some sadness and I could relate to what you were saying. You just need to push this piece to its limit and beyond.

[VioletRose]

Wow that is touching! And very sad and also a good write!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was very emotional. It made it good to read. I liked the way yoou described how the love was. It was a cute this to say. It was indeed very descriptive in my opinion. Thanks for sharing. :)