The Darkness

The take off in a plane at night put into a poetic form of emotions

Ember red specs 

amongst the black quilt,

until darkness takes over

and all the lights wilt.

Into the sea of darkness 

with nothing to be seen,

no stars, no moon, no land below

this darkness is obscene.

Surrounded by the emptiness 

surrounded by the dark,

surrounded by the nothingness 

of this long embark.

Soon to see the light again

and feel the suns warm glow,

but for now the darkness controls the night

this darkness continues to grow.

Reviews

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I love night time; if I would have a chance I think I would sleep at day and live at night... At night time everything looks much more beautiful, interesting and mysterious to me; I love travelling at night, especially in a plane...

You created some beautifully imagery here, and the rhyming is immense, too. Once again, this is an amazingly written piece. Very well done! :)

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i like it "surrounded by the emptiness
surrounded by the dark,
surrounded by the nothingness
of this long embark" . great read

[Missing Part]

this is very well writen I like it. good job.