The Darkness

The take off in a plane at night put into a poetic form of emotions

Ember red specs 

amongst the black quilt,

until darkness takes over

and all the lights wilt.

Into the sea of darkness 

with nothing to be seen,

no stars, no moon, no land below

this darkness is obscene.

Surrounded by the emptiness 

surrounded by the dark,

surrounded by the nothingness 

of this long embark.

Soon to see the light again

and feel the suns warm glow,

but for now the darkness controls the night

this darkness continues to grow.

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

wow, this sure puts a simple flight into perspective. definitely a great new angle in my opinion. good job here

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is very good. Darkness is always around us. We need hope and the desire of daylight to keep us going forward. A outstanding poem. I like the feel and the ending.
Coyote

[MissWordSmith]

i really liked this. but maybe go over it again, and smooth out the flow a little. like eliminate a few words and add a few here and there.

[Lexi =]]

I love this poem!
Great Flow(:

[Tears Forgotten]

This is really good.. There is a lot of strong flow.. awesome job!

[rockinmiley555]

i like it :) it mostly has a lot of darkness in it, but it has a little bit of hope too. my favorite stanza was the last one. :)

[Vanessa]

i love the second paragraph most of all!:)

[FireFly15]

Awesome poem, love it as always :]

[Yuvia Chairez]

Good piece.

[Alex W]

I like the darkness, I did use to travel about for walks late at night but I got attacked a few times (rough area) so I stopped doing it.

Still, I really like the dark. Good piece.