Missing You

I miss you more then words can say 
and more then I can show,
half way across this lonesome planet
I'm wishing I could go.

Go to where I first met you
to feel your warm embrace,
to hold you in my open arms
and talk to you face to face.

Hear your words that make me smile 
and the jokes that make me laugh,
with the things we share in common 
it's like you're my other half.

I miss you more then I can show
and more then these words can say,
I can't wait to see your face again
I'll be back for you one day.

Reviews

[Nathan Durham]

This was very beautiful. I like the powerful feeling of love in this poem.

[Liza]

what a beautiful poem of longing and of holding on to love's memory.

[Theresa]

Love the ending it brings it all together. It's sweet, heartfelt and really conveys how much you truly miss this person. Another beautiful piece.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this was adorable. I liked it a lot. It shows a lot of love for the girl. Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece.

[Vanessa]

beautiful:) the flow into the rest of the poem was swift, and its very relate-able. especially for me, my bf lives an hour and a half away from me :'(

[FireFly15]

I love this. The flow was absolutly perfect. Nothing seemed forced, nice job.

[Missing Part]

this is a good poem. we just have to be pacient one day it will be the same as it once was.

[Liz Alexander]

I have felt that way about someone when they left around the world. It brings tears to my eyes thinking bout it

[Katie Louise Hughes]

It's great, thanks for the read! :) Keep up the writing!!

This is a great and simple poem. such strong feelings and sentiments. The subject of this poem is very lucky.