From The Skies Above

Her eyes defy the stars

and touch my crippled soul,

she picked me up when I was down

and filled a bleeding hole.

Her voice defies the angels 

and takes away my pain,

she filled what wasn't there before

what used to be just shame.

I miss her face when I'm alone

and dream of her sweet kiss,

I think of her each day and night

but she stays amongst the mist. 

I will hold her in my arms again

whenever that will be,

like an angel fallen from the skies above

she soars through me so free.

Her eyes defy the stars

and touch my crippled soul,

she picked me up when I was down

and filled a bleeding hole.

Reviews

[Abhinav]

loved the rhyming schemes again.
magnificant poem, and you really put your heart and soul in to it.
thanks for sharing
Abby

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It was an excellent read. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing this with me. :)

[LisetteCanWrite!]

The ring of infactuation could be felt playing throughout this piece.. from the voice.. the appearance and soul.. there are so many great lines here! Could be written for a departed loved on though I felt moreso that it contained elements of loving a fallen angel.. and aren't we all?

No one is perfect in this world.. and so much we love of others can be found in this.. the voice of others we love.. the vision or memory of the power of what was felt through the soul's of a person's eyes (that can even apply to family and friends).. the ending was also very inspiring.. as just as when you needed her most she picked you up very enticing writing full of desire, passion and I believe a great level of love too! I really loved the depth and flow of emotions pouring out in this.. great stuff!

[garfen]

This makes me think much more of what you've gone through bro, amazing

[Lilly]

Incredible poem. There is an amazing beauty created with your words here.

[Toxic.Kiss]

Amazing!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love and desire. I could feel the honor of your words for this woman. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote