From The Skies Above

Her eyes defy the stars

and touch my crippled soul,

she picked me up when I was down

and filled a bleeding hole.

Her voice defies the angels 

and takes away my pain,

she filled what wasn't there before

what used to be just shame.

I miss her face when I'm alone

and dream of her sweet kiss,

I think of her each day and night

but she stays amongst the mist. 

I will hold her in my arms again

whenever that will be,

like an angel fallen from the skies above

she soars through me so free.

Her eyes defy the stars

and touch my crippled soul,

she picked me up when I was down

and filled a bleeding hole.

Reviews

[A]

Oh my! I LOVED this! I love how everything just flows so smoothly together. I love the rhyme scheme you chose. It fits perfectly. I also really like how you repeated the first stanza in the end. I could see this being a song. Great, great, GREAT piece! :)

[Ki]

Who is this beautiful poem about?

[YourXArtist]

Once again, amazing :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a depth and beauty here... a wonderful vitality to her life mingled now with yours. So well done!

[Keevan]

beautiful. and the flow was wonderful. well done!

[Tainted Devotion]

I love the flow and rhyme work of this poem. It's very sweet in it's own way, and of course romantic. I really love this one.

[Bette]

i like this flow... well done!

[Chelsea.]

I love your writing format, and your rhyming is simply amazing. It does not seem forced, and flows very nicely. You have mass potential.

[Rainey]

this is beautiful and rhymed so perfectly. i like how you describe her its sooo sweet

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i can feel the emotion in this, great write