From The Skies Above

Her eyes defy the stars

and touch my crippled soul,

she picked me up when I was down

and filled a bleeding hole.

Her voice defies the angels 

and takes away my pain,

she filled what wasn't there before

what used to be just shame.

I miss her face when I'm alone

and dream of her sweet kiss,

I think of her each day and night

but she stays amongst the mist. 

I will hold her in my arms again

whenever that will be,

like an angel fallen from the skies above

she soars through me so free.

Her eyes defy the stars

and touch my crippled soul,

she picked me up when I was down

and filled a bleeding hole.

Reviews

[Maria F. Rojas]

beautifully written!

[Liza]

her eyes challenge the stars and touch your crippled soul....she picked you up when you were down....and filled a bleeding hole...

beautifully expressed of the longing for someone to save a crippled soul - perhaps a big order to fill yet beautifully expressed :)

[indieRokker]

You're a very good rhymer and you're good at being able to let the flow of your rhymes go with the rhythm of your poems, they fit and so I find this poem intriguing,

Great Job
indie♥

[Krista]

Very well written. I enjoyed reading. I can relate to this as well.

This is an awesome poem. The emotion just pours off the page.

[Kayla_May]

wow. that left me in awe. i teared up!

[Fallen Angel]

Wow this is a brilliant piece of writing, i love the detail and the heart and the imagery is amazing. great poem as always =)

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is so great! It's very heartfelt and deep~ It flowed so well :D
Great job!

[Katie]

The description of this poem is profound. I love the rhyming and flow of this. Its great.

[Anonymous]

The rhyming was great, and this whole thing flowed wonderfully. I agree with Angela, this would make an excellent song.
Beautiful poem!

~Outcast