Seeing Through Blind Eyes

I didn't know who was talking to me at first until I read her poems and bio. It was the one who I'v been missing and loving with my whole heart.

Today I saw 

how blind I am,

when you stood right there

and I moved no hand.

Your words were clear 

but I did not see,

that it was you 

just wanting me.

Then my eyes were opened

and I saw it was you,

my tears poured out

my heart broke new. 

I keep trying, and trying and trying

to hear your sweet soft voice,

but two people deny

our whole hearted choice.

I will come back

to see your face,

in the spot we met

remember the place?

Reviews

[Bette]

bittersweet. well done.

[rockinmiley555]

aww i really like this. i can tell you really care about her

[Felicity Winter]

awe I like this, it's very good.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is really sad, i hope youre doing well, but i like that in the end it is hopeful