Seeing Through Blind Eyes

I didn't know who was talking to me at first until I read her poems and bio. It was the one who I'v been missing and loving with my whole heart.

Today I saw 

how blind I am,

when you stood right there

and I moved no hand.

Your words were clear 

but I did not see,

that it was you 

just wanting me.

Then my eyes were opened

and I saw it was you,

my tears poured out

my heart broke new. 

I keep trying, and trying and trying

to hear your sweet soft voice,

but two people deny

our whole hearted choice.

I will come back

to see your face,

in the spot we met

remember the place?

Reviews

[Liza]

another poem of longing....i hope your muse meets you at your favorite place to inspire you with joy instead of lack

[Krista]

Like I say with all your writing. It is very well written. I enjoyed reading all of your work so far this was my second favorite of yours so far. KEEP IT UP!!

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is very sweet~
It flowed nicely and the rhyme was just lovely :3

[YourXArtist]

aww. this is really sweet. :)

This is sweet and very touching, good luck!

[FireFly15]

I love this, its so sweet.

[Vanessa Macanas]

Nice piece, I do agree with some about it being a cut little short, But still I really enjoyed it =)

[Rainey]

Beautiful and well written. I enjoyed the message behind it, nice work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I felt the disappointment and desire strongly in your words. I like the ending. A possibility. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Alz Alz]

WOW Love this poem. It's really got more than one meaning... I think i'll have to reread it before I go to try and pick it apart some more... 10/10