Nobody

Nobody

A Poem by LivingDeath

Nobody can tell me how to feel

Nobody can grasp this pained ordeal,

Nobody can look through my blood shot eyes

Nobody should know these last goodbyes.

© 2010 LivingDeath


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short, but an excellent piece, nice work

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very sad and painful short writing.. and it's true that no one can tell you how to feel nor feel what it is you feel though there are many out there that can relate. If this is reality I would say don't be afraid to speak to somebody about what you feel.. if those close to you don't understand be bold and try something different! There are crisis lines and therapists to help people with any situation (it's confidential too.. no one needs to know).

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is sad, short, yet so true. people THINK they know exactly what someone is going through, but they never REALLY know.

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is heartbreaking, short yet powerful, well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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"I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not." ~Kurt Cobain. Wasssup guys! I am me, if you want my name, ask me for it. Life in every breath, is my motto. 22 years old, living .. more..

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