Nobody

Nobody can tell me how to feel

Nobody can grasp this pained ordeal,

Nobody can look through my blood shot eyes

Nobody should know these last goodbyes.

Reviews

[Missing Part]

It's a good one babe but don't let things get you down no matter how hard.

[Erin_is_peace]

Wow four lines and so much pain. even though its really short it tells so much about the lowest times in peoples lives.

[Theresa]

You said so much in such few words. I love the last line:
"Nobody should know these last goodbyes"
It really made me think and it summed up the lines above it. Nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are correct. Each of us must face what is in front of our life. A outstanding poem. Said it all in so few words. Thank you.
Coyote

[Undying Glory]

short but really nice...great

[Abhinav]

yes,it might be short but the meaning was hard hitting.....should have been longer,yes....but that doesnt matter!
nice write!

people ought to know that they shouldn't dare say that they've been through something that you've been through.
that's one of the things that pisses me off.

[Chelsea.]

Short, but packed with a lot.
Great job.

[Keevan]

very emotional. i like this poem. Nice Write!

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Short, but straight to the point. Very powerful, I like this.