Nobody

Nobody can tell me how to feel

Nobody can grasp this pained ordeal,

Nobody can look through my blood shot eyes

Nobody should know these last goodbyes.

Reviews

[Shannon]

Depressing and detached, almost like the poem has become an entity itself and is slowly pushing the reader away line-by-line.

[Krista]

It is very well written and very emotional for me to read. I can relate to everything that you wrote in this poem. I hope you can understand that what you say is true and nobody but you can know what you been through. You are right nobody can tell you how to feel either. I want to cry after reading this honestly

[Mistaken]

this may be short but it is very powerful

[YourXArtist]

short, but still really good. :)

[Liza]

you're right - nobody can see through your eyes or feel through your skin - you tell'em! thank U for sharing!

Excellent!

[An owl on the moon]

This is a powerful write, and the repetition drives home the feeling of alienation. Excellent, moving piece.

[FireFly15]

Another beautiful piece. I think I love everything you write :] Excelent as usual.

[Soul Magic✯]

outstanding ink. each line speaks truth and volume... loved the flow in this piece. very nicely done