Memories

Moonlight shines on the midnight road 

 Emphasizing the morning dew,

  Music plays as soft as love

   Over the nights with you.

    Rising to the waking sun

     I stand here by your side,

      Enjoying all the time we have

       Strolling through the oceans tide.

Reviews

[Aimee Mahathy]

Wow, I think this is one of my favourites of yours!
It flows so fluidly, so naturally!
The images here were amazing, the road with the dew, and the sun and the ocean- what vivid colours were painted. Your word choice was brilliant! I was seriously stunned with "Music plays as soft as love" That was powerful.
Great job!

[Shannon]

This was elegant and i really liked the physical shape you put the poem into, however it doesn't feel quite finished after i read it, it was like walking up a set of stairs and trying to step on the last one only to find you've already reached the top.

[Liza]

flowing rhyme

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was nice man, I liked it..
While I was reading it, it reminded me of someone..so, that is a good thing, I guess :)
But I genuinely liked it, reminded me of one of the songs by Within Temptation

[A]

Adorable...I love this! I love the imagery and the calming feel to this piece. It's short but very sweet. This truely is a great poem! :)

[Rainey]

probably one of my new faves (:

[FireFly15]

Beautiful, simply beautiful.

[Theresa]

Beautiful imagery and detail. I also like the format it kind of reminds me of a wave. You create a sweet and romantic story in only a few lines. Nicely done.

[Chelsea.]

This is a cute poem :)
I like how you formatted the writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Those midnight walk and long talks will be the best days and nights in a life. I like the story and the feel of this poem. Took me to a ocean and a good night. A excellent poem.
Coyote