True Friendships

Hard times won't last forever
but true friendships always will,
making memories along the way
conquering the steepest hill.

True frienships don't come easy
they're very rare to find,
but when you do your heart's reborn
it's truly one of a kind.

They'll help you along the way
through the up's and down's,
they'll keep a smile on your face
and wipe away your frowns.

You might hit a couple bumps
and see the other way,
but that's the things that true friends do
they'll come back no matter what you say.

They'll see you to the very end
and all the spots between,
you'll share so many memories
you'll be the unstoppable team.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh I loved this .. from the writing to one of the most adorable photos I have ever seen that is so full of life that brings me back to my own childhood. The rhythm, rhyme and flow was really great.. the message is timeless and where true friendship should be! If this was written for the friendship of that between these two boys.. what a wonderful thing to be friends for so many years and not let it go through the good and bad!

[Raven Radke]

This one made me smile and cry (tears of happiness tho)
I simply loved it! Best work I have ever read! I think every time I need help with a best friend I'll this nice little poem! Just to get my day going!
Keep up the good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Your words are true. True friends stay with you in the good and the bad times. I like the flow and the story in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Really fun to read, the poem flows greatly. I love this... And the pic!

[deeps]

This is just plain wonderful and such a enjoyable read. I like this alot.

[Lilly]

such an adorable poem - flowed very nicely and the rhyme was great

[Felicity Winter]

Love this! It is hard to find a true friendships, but when you do it's something to hang on to forever.

[FireFly15]

I love this! its really sweet and 100% true. My friends mean the world to me. I can see yours mean a lot to you too :]

Excelent write, keep up the good work!

[Chelsea.]

This was cute ^_^
Flowed nicely.

Very Nice. "but when you do your heart's reborn
it's truly one of a kind.' love this line.
Great flow and symmetry good feeling throughout.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

excellent