Psycho

I'M NOT CRAZY xD

I stare into the darkness

insomnia kicking in,

demons in the shadows

watching my everymove.

 

Forever to be paranoid

of the hands that grab my thoughts,

eyes that look down upon me

from dark corners of my world.

 

Voices echo in my head

voices not of mine,

screaming at me every night

telling me to end my life.

 

Shadows push me to my knees

hands pulling me further down,

hands that come up through the ground

from the darkest pits of hell.

 

I stare into the darkness

insomnia kicking in,

demons in the shadows

watching my everymove.

Reviews

[Lilly]

very powerful piece

[*Evelen*]

Another very strong piece you have here, and another very great write. Well done=)

[Felicity Winter]

This is very powerful. I enjoyed it.

[The Wave]

wow
great write.

you described this so well. i was consumed by your words and ultimately felt them as if they were my own. nice word choice,
overall, well written
good job.

[Raven Radke]

lovely! very lovely!
and i know your not crazy!

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is really good i like it very much (i love all of your work) .... i was diagnosed with bipolar disorder and ... well.... this poem reminds me of a panic attack... which happen to me

[Sharkapillar]

Not something to be taken lightly, love, what you've written here happens to me 24/7. Very frightening.
But overall a very nice poem (well duh, you wrote it) with perfect flow and imagery. ♥
~Blessed Be~