I Cannot Fly

I cannot fly with mangled wings

I cannot live from broken dreams,

I cannot see through tainted eyes

I cannot love through twisted lies.

Reviews

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Mmm, very nice. So much said in so few words. Wonderful job!!!

Heather

[Rainey]

This is so deep and meaningful, like it hits a chord in you.

[Coyote Poetry]

To the point. Simple rules we need to live by. A excellent poem. I can't stand liars. No excuse for not telling the truth. We can't allow the world to ties us down, Need to be able to dream and see the world clear.
Coyote

[Shannon]

Short. Sweet. And to the point. An excellent poem, flow and rhyme was perfectly set, and the emotion you have managed to project from those few words is astonishing. Great job.

[The Wave]

short but effective

love this, at the end of each line i would pause to think about what i just read.
overall, written well, love that it was thought-provoking for me, great flow
good job

[Katie]

This has such a beautiful tone. Short but every words rings soo true. You have great talent.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

this is amazing and so true... i love this .... you have a beautiful talent

[*Evelen*]

Wow this is so powerful and true. I really like this poem. It's amazing. Well done=)

[Sharkapillar]

Very short, but very beautiful, and very true. Also very sad, but that's inevitable with your poetry. (No offense) Fantastic job, love. ♥
~Blessed Be~

[deeps]

Isn't this the truth. There are some that just can't see this either. I thought this was brillant. Such an amazing flow of words too.