Dear Agony

Dear agony 

you and me inharmony

no one knows what we truly see.

I am with you all the time

you're there when I'm not fine

your life the same as mine. 

Over and over, repetitious 

pain like rain, so malicious 

part of me so propitious.

Though you leave me emancipated

it feels though I'm decapitated 

my life utterly annihilated.

So leave me dead

let me drip the crimson red 

as you linger in my head. 

Dear agony 

you and me inharmony

no one knows what we truly see.

Reviews

[Keevan]

when i saw the title, i was thinking that you (sorry) ripped it off Breaking Benjamin (LUVS THEM), but i'm glad i read it. It was a very nice write ^w^
~~Zesika-chan~~

[VioletRose]

I liked the poem a lot... it was so vivid...(I think that's the word

[Sharkapillar]

I liked "I Promise" better.
Why? you ask.
An excellent question, I reply. perhaps it's because that is a HAPPY poem and you know I hate it when you're unhappy, even if it's just influenced by Breaking Benjamin (♥) !!!!!!!!!!!
That means you should be happy.
PS I like the poem though, even if you did rip them off XD
hey, love me or hate me :P