Dear Agony

Dear agony 

you and me inharmony

no one knows what we truly see.

I am with you all the time

you're there when I'm not fine

your life the same as mine. 

Over and over, repetitious 

pain like rain, so malicious 

part of me so propitious.

Though you leave me emancipated

it feels though I'm decapitated 

my life utterly annihilated.

So leave me dead

let me drip the crimson red 

as you linger in my head. 

Dear agony 

you and me inharmony

no one knows what we truly see.

Reviews

[Kayla_May]

its really good and i relate to it =]

[Hollywood]

I like this rhyme: "Dear agony
you and me inharmony
no one knows what we truly see."

I can really relate to this poem, I'd like to know what you & your agony see.
It's well written & expresses how I feel most every day.

[r]

this is an awesome poem. it reminds me of the breaking benjamin song dear agony.... thats a good thing! lol.... well nice work!

[*Evelen*]

This was another great write very painful and dark in a way. This poem really sucks you in like you just can't look away from it. Very nice write here and well done.=)

[Undying Glory]

brilliant work. the title's really attention grabbing, as well as the rest of the poem. great!

[Alz Alz]

The first stanza DEFINITELY captured my attention. I LOVE THIS POEM. The rhyme really helped to move things along and the overall meaning is phenomenal. Another great poem, I give this one 100/100! A+! Great job.

[The Wave]

the first stanza really got my attention

but i started to lose the flow of this incredible poem in the middle! maybe it needs some editing or something, but
overall, the poem is strong. loved that you described a word in this way.
good job.

[BluesForTheRisingSun]

The name of this poem caught my eye. Usually, I'm not too psyched about rhyming. I think its not necessary in poetry, but in this one, it worked well. What I'm trying to say, with too many words, is that I really enjoyed reading this- and can relate. Great write :)

[deeps]

This is just simply amazing here. I enjoyed this write.

[Taylor H.]

i really liked it. Great word choices, great job.