Dear Agony

Dear agony 

you and me inharmony

no one knows what we truly see.

I am with you all the time

you're there when I'm not fine

your life the same as mine. 

Over and over, repetitious 

pain like rain, so malicious 

part of me so propitious.

Though you leave me emancipated

it feels though I'm decapitated 

my life utterly annihilated.

So leave me dead

let me drip the crimson red 

as you linger in my head. 

Dear agony 

you and me inharmony

no one knows what we truly see.

Reviews

[Adam :P]

good poem. i liked it keep it up!

[Aimee Mahathy]

Very sad, but a very good read! It's amazing when you can turn misery into beauty :3 And I think that's the trick.
Great job!

[c.m.]

Sad, but gorgeous

[Rainey]

stunning.. so incredibly beautiful and dark at the same time :)
nice stuff

[Liz Alexander]

Beautiful and sad

[Yuvia Chairez]

Dark yet not sad. It feels like the battle between one's own solitude and the separation has come to be at peace. It reminds me a lot of a song by a Mexican rock group, Cafe Tacuva, called "Soledad" (Loneliness)...

[Erin_is_peace]

Wow this is really good! Very dark but I like how you described everything with such detail. Very good write.

[bre]

This is a very dark write, this is a kind of writing I have never really been able to put on paper, because it makes me feel vulnerable, so i applaud you for being able to share this.

So leave me dead
let me drip the crimson red
as you linger in my head.

this stanza sticks out the most to me, I'm not quite sure why, but i enjoyed this piece very much. can't wait to read more.

bre

[Shadow666]

Agony, always a good write. Good job

[Katie]

The first sentence really stood out to me. This was brilliant and it had just the right flow- Great job.