Bring It Back To The Times

Just a little fun.. Some cut outs of songs i like and a couple of my own words in place to make it flow better.. No copy right infringement intended. just a little fun

Baby let's take this time to make some memories

If it's alright with you then it's alright with me

There's nothing left to say

Don't waste another day

Just you and me tonight

And everything will be alright.

If one day you wake up and find your missing me

your heart starts to wonder where on this earth I could be

Thinking maybe you'll come back here to the place that we'd meet

And you'll see me waiting for you on our corner of the street.

Saying really what do you see 

When you're looking at me? 

See me come up from nothing, 

To me living my dreams 

For all of my life

If you could just see

That all of my joy

Was when you were here with me.

Bring it back to the time when you and me had just begun

When I was still your number one

Well it might seem far-fetched baby girl but it can be done

I've got this feeling fire blazing and it's hot just like the sun

Know you feel it too my girl just freeze up may the good vibes run.

But I guess it's time I run, run far far away; find comfort in pain,

All pleasure's the same, it's just tears and rain.

Cause you're not coming back and baby thats such a shame.

Reviews

[LivingDeath]

how is something I did for fun turning out to be something I feel? I really just want to bring it back to the times

[Aimee Mahathy]

This is lovely~
A very unique idea! :D It flows together really well~
Well done!

[Undying Glory]

brilliant work, even if it was just an arrangement of song lyrics. this is really good

[A]

This poem started of so sweet and pleasant and then the last stanza was a twist. liked that "surprise." Great poem...your writing or not...it was put together well :)

[Kayla_May]

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[*Evelen*]

Wow this is very good. Well writen and sadness is what I feel. =) well done

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I guess , it will make a great song lyric.
The rhythm is very strong and striking. Literally, it could have been much better

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

again this is a good write ..... i like it very much... you are very talented :)

[A Touch of Insanity:)]

Writing is definitely your thing :) I love the way this flows, it makes me feel safe...

[Felicity Winter]

Dude. This is amazing, I love it.