Drowning in Air

I'm falling through the emptiness

drowning in the air,

soaring through the gates of hell

after I slipped and fell.

 

A mistake to last a life time

only God knows truly how,

but I let you get away

and I miss you every day.

 

My feelings for you linger

living in my heart,

but you live so far away

away from this prarie hay.

 

I'm falling through the emptiness

drowning in the air,

my feelings stand beside me

wanting to be free.

Reviews

[Theresa]

Another heartfelt and emotional write. Your poems are always strong with emotions making the reader feel what you are going through. Nicely done.

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[A.M. Everlasting]

I loved the first stanza, but thought it fell a little flat in the third stanza. However, u pulled it together for the final stanza and made this a great poem :) Ur works are always worth the read.

[Wolfbaby]

Great poem! You expressed yourself well. I only noticed one misspelled word, the first word in the third stanza: "feelings". Also, remember to capitalize your I's. Other than that it was pretty well done. Great Job!

~Wolfbaby