You're Not Alone

Ever feeling down? Well dont do something you'll regret because you're not the only one it will affect.

You’re not alone

I’m here by your side

Along this bumpy ride

 

With life’s twists and turns

Hug the winding curves

I know it will take some nerves.

 

But don’t go over the edge

I’m here in the other seat

Your death would be my defeat.

 

Your actions affect me

Surly you can see

 

I care about you greatly

So if you left this earth

My life would be without worth.

 

Even if I don’t know you

You still have my utmost care

So please don’t leave us, in this crisp November’s air.

Reviews

[Bullet Soul]

Words can't describe how much I love this! The things you have written here are things that all of us need to be reminded of once in awhile. Your poem is amazingly uplifting, and it definitely put a smile on my face. I thank you for that! This poem makes you seem like a very caring and generous person. There is a lot of dark and depressing writing out there, and God knows that people need more uplifting and caring writing such as this poem here. Thank you for the happiness you have surely spread by posting this!

Oh, just a quick suggestion - you forgot the "e" in "surely" in the 11th line. No big deal, but just thought I would you know. I hope that you are very proud of this poem, because it truly is a great piece!

[Theresa]

You wrote exactly how I feel about this specific situation. To do something such as that will only leave the people who cared about you and loved you hurt and wondering the rest of their lives what they could have done to save you. Tomorrow is another day and there are so many people that don't have the choice for another day so appreciate what you do have. Great piece, you wrote it perfectly.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. We need to tell the one's we love. I will stand with you. A powerful poem.
Coyote

[Sharkapillar]

nice, dude...hands hurt yet? XD
great write,
♥♥

[bluessadmood]

I was dragged to this by the words you are not alone..how moving..
few weeks ago i read another one say ,I care..it carried the same lovely message
i dont know if this is too personal,though i doubt it..thats why i liked it
no,you are not alone for i am by your side on this miserable ride
life s twists and turns..its a long and lonely winding road
you get injured and i get hurt,your words move me ,could you see
i care a lot,you may not know,if you leave its like the end of me
a very moving loving write..it really means a lot..and i just loved it
lovely write..

[deeps]

This has a vaulable lesson in it, this is very well written.
I like this alot!