E is for Ef it

E is for Ef it

A Poem by LivingDeath

I've had it with trying

I've decided to give up

You say they wont let me

Well I don't give a f**k.

I won't come

I won't try

Screw the effort

It can die.

I hate it here

I think it's gay

F**k December

I leave today. 

© 2009 LivingDeath


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I love it too!! Such strong words!! And I love that!! You show so much angst in such a short poem!! That is amazing talent!! Great write!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this! The title drew me in at first, and the poem is short, maybe not so sweet, but to the point, and works effectively. Nice.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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this one is amazing talent
luv ya
abbie

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I love this! So simple but got your point across clearly. Not looking forward to December either...maybe that's why I like this poem...very well done! Great poem :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hahaha, I LOVE this! I think the title is so creative..and I totally can relate to this! This semester for me is really rough, and this completely expresses how I'm feelin'! I'm not quite to my breaking point yet, but I'm getting there, lol. Loved it, well done!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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"I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not." ~Kurt Cobain. Wasssup guys! I am me, if you want my name, ask me for it. Life in every breath, is my motto. 22 years old, living .. more..

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