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I will, I want, I have

I will, I want, I have

A Poem by LivingDeath

I will be a shoulder,

                When the people around me need me most.
I want to be a light,
                When the world around us is to dark to see what needs to be seen.
I used to be a shadow,
                Until I was released from the melancholy of my life.
I let go of the pain,
                To let love pour in.
I have forgotten,
                Just so that I could remember.

© 2009 LivingDeath


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I truly love this.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Another great piece!! I love the last lines "I have forgotten, So that I could remember". Gorgeous write!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is a really great piece. It shows what type of person you are especially to the people around you. I love the last lines:
"I have forgotten,
Just so that I could remember."
It's like the two lines contradict each other, but make perfect sense. Really nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so wonderful,
such an enjoyable read!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I really like this...I like the formatting and the content is on point...however line 4 should say "too"

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 6, 2009

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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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