Across the Sands of Time

Could I have a lifetime wish

to steal the stars of endless bliss,

forget the pain that fills the sky

to find my home amongst your eyes.

Float atop the black hole sun

count the ashes one by one,

walk the oceans hand in hand

to etch our dreams across the sand. 

Reminisce the reveries

the painted perfect memories,

like peaceful sleep away from harm

knotted in eachothers arms.

For yesterdays were yesteryears

today lets live to feel no fear,

forget the pain that fills the sky

and find your home within my eyes.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem. Beautifully written with a nice message.

[DreyaArt]

Very nice! Well written, beautiful rhythm, great imagery. I very much like this. You really are a poet.

[Jessie]

You write such amazing poems.. I loved this! thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more.tc

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem.
"forget the pain that fills the sky
to find my home amongst your eyes."
I like the above lines the best. We need to release sorrow and pain. Open new doors of opportunity. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[daydreamer]

Awesome emotional write. Carried me into land of joy and pain. Good work my friend:)

[prodicallife]

HI LivingDeath

I seriously don't know whether you understand Hindi or not so trying to express my emotions (not reviews) in english. There are two words in particular in hindi 'waah' and 'aah'. The previous one is used when something makes you feel happy. The another one is used, when something almost holds your hand and very swiftly drifts you into the emotions and makes you feel standing in the character.

What a writing. Stay blessed and keep up the beautiful writing

Regards
Prodical

[barricade]

beautiful write! Loved it!

[A Risen Heroine.]

Wow, just... Wow, blew me away, I really love this piece... Wow...

~A Risen Heroine~

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

I must be honest; I always look forward to reading your work, simply because everything you write has such beautiful flow and it means something to me. You have such a knack for words, I'm jealous. Incredibly. You have such a gift!

[Tainted Devotion]

This is spectacularly beautiful. You are a very gifted writer. I absolutely love reading all of your work.