A Beauty Unsold

I once made a promise

to never let go,

to stand right beside you

no matter the road;

I know its been broken

some times have been cold,

but if there's one thing I want

that's for us to grow old;

to walk through the future

of a dream paved in gold,

swim through the oceans

a beauty unsold;

forget all the scars 

let them all fade away,

the one thing I want

is you here today. 

Reviews

[DreyaArt]

Well done,
This brings back memories of my life before now.
A moving piece of imagery,
sad and moving.
Very beautiful as usual.
I hope that you are doing well and are continuing to write.
Eventually,
all of your scars will fade and you will be alright again. But something that I learned from Ellen DeGeneres is that sometimes your heart has to break, you have to be broken some times; it lets the light in.
Just remember, in darkness you will find only the absence of light.
If you are the light,
darkness will never find you.

[Jessie]

Wow! another great write...It gave me goosebumps, lol thanks for always sharing..write on...

[daydreamer]

Beautiful poem filled with melody and rhymes.. nice refreshing read:)

[Bertie]

A short sweet poem...The poetic voice throughout has an intense longing which doesn't let up...The rhymes I think lend themselves to it, as the emphasis on certain words really highlights the emotion of the piece and for me give it an almost fairytale, childlike feel, which makes it all the more innocent and therefore all the more compelling, well done :) x

[Mistaken]

Aww. Beautiful and completely romantic

[i-love-you-boo♥]

this is beautiful awesome job:)

[Balls:)]

this was pretty awesome :)

[stars are far]

that was so awesome ..
i loved this .. i think it is the best thing you wrote ..
so yeah .. keep it up :)

[Coyote Poetry]

"to walk through the future
of a dream paved in gold,
swim through the oceans
a beauty unsold;"
The above words are beautiful and positive. We need to have someone to share a life with. Better to share beauty and life with a good friend. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tainted Devotion]

V ery touching and romantic.