Reason

When there's reason for suspicion,

don't suspect.

When there's reason to question,

don't ask.

When there's reason to fall out,

rise up.

Because when there's a reason to die,

you'll need everything to live on.

Author's Note

I wrote this in the car. hah. thoughts?

Reviews

[LittleMadGirl]

I see what you did there (:
And I see a lot of controversy and I do fully diagree, but explaining my point of view would go way too since it has nothing to do with a "review".

The poem itself is uplifting yet a little depressing and that's what makes it special. That's what life's all about, living on even if there are plenty of reasons to die.
You dressed that thought is nice words and I can see how much emotion was put in it ...

[stars are far]

really great :)

[Keevan]

I can't think of anything to describe this but amazing. It might be too deep for my brain to fully comprehend what I just read! :) Great work!

[Nameless]

Has such meaning. Like Emily said, almost like a proverb. Like something I would write on a paper and keep with me as a reminder. Love it.

[Knoxxeh]

I enjoyed reading it I espically lovethe last two lines great job
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[SamBug]

Wow. This was soooo good. I enjoyed reading it, especially the ending. It really had a great message

[emily]

Really cool and insightful, for something so short. Feels like it could almost be a proverb or something. Very simple and pretty. Excellent!

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[SOUL LESS]

lol...weird in a good way. It's something unique. :)

[Dupree]

This is a really good poem. Inspiration can strike at any moment, even during a car ride.

[c.m.]

If we could all live like this, life would be much better, I think. Nice thought you have here.