A Bunch Of Pictures

I really loved it when,
The places we would go,
There was a camera 'round our necks,
With memories to show.

Living in a moment,
So beautiful but sick,
Loving every second,
Captured with a click.

But when people fall apart,
The memories don't fade.
You can't forget the moments,
Or the memories you made.

Leaving behind the facts,
Everything you captured,
the days when you had more,
Than a bunch of pictures.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar please.

Reviews

[Arianna]

i love it.
it was perfect.
i can relate to every word.
well written :)

[Nameless]

i really liked this. im a photographer myself, so i can really relate to each and every stanza :P it was light and beautiful really. :)

[Keevan]

I really liked it. The flow was wonderful and the meaning in the words was beautiful. Truly an amazing write. Keep on writing, my friend.

[Knoxxeh]

You haqve a great style in poetry and I admire that you do great at ryhming and making the words flow through your peices and I lovethis poem all about a camera and some pictures and what apicture can do recapture a moment that will last forever through the picture great work :)
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[SOUL LESS]

Words are wasted here. Detail can never replace strength. Try to put a bit more effort in editing it in places, you know just a few minor adjustments.
Push up the vocab level, a few expressions, comparisons maybe *shrug*
I'm sorry if it's a lil harsh but u said u wanted honesty :)

You have a good mind. Use it. Keep Writing. :)

[r]

Lost love, oh how do I know this feeling, all too well. It is a painful thing to deal with. I love the poem though. Keep up the great writing

[shoaib]

grammar ignored

content approved :)
nice work !

[SamBug]

This was pretty good. I know how it feels. You take so many pictures to catch the memories but then something fades and they're all just reminders. I enjoyed reading this. Fantastic job!