He Said

He said he liked her personality.

Her laugh,

her smile,

everything.

He said he liked to be with her.

Hold her hand,

Kiss her,

Keep her close.

He said he wanted to do more.

More than kissing.

than holding,

a lot more.

She said no.

So,

He said he needed time alone.

It was him,

not her.

Of course.

He said he'd stay.

If she proved it.

That she loved him.

In the real way.

He said it was over.

after she proved it.

Lost it.

to a liar.

Author's Note

It doesn't rhyme, and its kinda weak, but I needed to write this outt.
It's not about me.

It's about my friend and this douche.
He needs to know,
LOVE IS IN YOUR HEART.
NOT YOUR PANTS.

Reviews

[The Cute 1]

i sooo understand how u feel

[typingaway]

Poems don't need to rhyme to make them good.

I'm not going to comment saying "Yeah all boys are like this, they're always going to be like this" because that would be incorrect... In fact it's not only males, it's females, too. People get used every single day, it could be for sex, money, drugs, popularity, shelter... anything!

You've really showed that people can be so shallow just to get what they desire, and you've wrote this quite well, so well done.(:

[c.m.]

Seems like this is just how guys are...a story I know pretty well. Nice poem.