Observations

When you sit on a park bench.

And watch everyone pass by,

you notice things when you pay attention.

And see people close, fly.

Observe the nature.

The people.

Ideas portrayed.

The animals.

Life.

Dreams being made.

Deeply thinking.

Feeling the sensation.

Loving the view,

the certain observation.

Author's Note

Challenged.

Reviews

[Nameless]

I love the second stanza, I think it really reflects all that you're aiming for with this. it gets you're mind going about the everday things you observe in life. pretty cool :)

[LittleMadGirl]

Obervatin your surroundings is one of my favorite thigs to to and there's certainly nothing that can teach you a better lesson about the world than losing oneself in observation.
I think the poem lack a bit of structure and it's a little out of rhythm, but the second stanza is amazing.