Anything and Everything

about him. (:

You're anything,

everything,

more than enough,

perfect.

 

I love you more

than anything,

everything,

anyone, ever will.

 

I can't explain,

anything,

everything.

Nothing, and I never will.

 

Perfect with you.

Better than anything,

everyting.

I miss you,

I need you now.

Author's Note

I know, it repeats anything and everything over and over.
buut..
They are the only words I could think of right now to describe
how I feel! critisism welcome. (:

Reviews

[Chelsea.]

I relate :)
Short, but gets to the point.
When you have more time to think, you should write a more in depth poem,
im sure it'll be great .
Good poem :)

[quill of shadows]

repetitve or not u should never be afraid to write whats on ur mind/in ur heart well done and i do agree the unuwalnes is what sets it apart from the same old rif raf of whitch i often bore myself reading on this site

[Manda]

haha this was different but creative.... hmmm. i have to say i am surprised i liked it. but i did. so good job =]

[Cheyenne]

I agree with LMG she is right the repititon makes it special! Of course i enjoy anything you write so i love it!!

[LittleMadGirl]

The repetition of those words are what makes this poem special
it's not too much, it's fine

it's really powerfull, I like how the bright and happy mood suddenly changes at the end