You are Beautiful ?

They call you beautiful.

When They know who you are.

Your personality doesn't matter,

As long as you'll go far.

 

 

You are vain.

You are greedy.

You are fake.

You are needy.

You are hateful.

You are rude.

You are selfish.

You are prude.

 

 

You're still loved,

by all your so-called friends.

But, I know for a fact,

they won't be there in the end.

 

With all your terrible qualities..

I think it's very pitiful.

So understand why I ask,

Why do people call you beautiful?

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

This one was really hard for me?
took my two days.
Soo, it's kinda bad still.. :/
But I hope you enjoy itt.

Reviews

[Jason Ellis]

Blunt 'n' to the point :)
People like that make me want to eat a kitten.
They think they're so attractive, and others seem to agree.
Then, people like me, and apparently you, stand to the side and think, "What do they see in her?"
They may look alright on the exterior, but their personality makes them uglier than the ugliest little duckling ever could've been.
And at least he was kinda cute 'cause he was a baby duck ^_^

[quill of shadows]

thees words are burnd into the back of my head and bring only one thing to mind high school walking passed all the little eragent prepys with there fansy cars there perents bought it seems whene people read ur poems they canot help but to be perswaded to agree with every word u say congrats

[Chelsea.]

I really like this one! :)
It shows how society kind of is, more concerned about looks rather than who we are as people. Nicely done :D
-adds to reading list-

[Analgesia]

If I'm not mistaken it should be you're a prude, not you are prude (that would be prudish). Some of the piece is very well organized and you have a point to make, so I can't complain.

[LittleMadGirl]

Don't underestimate your work!
This one was nice, especially the first 3 stanzas

One thing to say:
The rythm of the last two lines gets kinda lost and the repeated "why" makes it sound choppy and a bit careless
I'd change it into something like "So understand me asking/why people call you beautiflul"

Still verry good work

[Keevan]

I know a couple people like that. I refer to them as either plastics or barbie dolls. But very good poem.