I Should Be Over It

And don't say,

that if I am falling,

you'll make everything okay.

We both know,

that can't be the truth.

Just a lie in a long line.

I already said it,

"I love you"

and I can't take it back.

Wasted and regretted,

I knew it would end

just like this.

No words and no tears,

nothing else to say.

It ends with my fears.

Held back, confused.

I can't say what's on my mind.

Like always, all I can say is goodbye.

Don't want to leave,

it just felt right..

I don't even kow anymore.

Author's Note

totally random and weak. nothing to do with my life,
A song actually inspired this. It's not good, just came into my head. took like, two minutes. :) Soo, critique all you want! I want it to be better.

Reviews

[Nameless]

oddly this sounds exactly like my mind not too long ago haha. it's freeflowing and it may sound unstructured but i think its supposed to be that way. i think its meant to reflect on what is going on in a person's mind as they just write it out; no thinking involved, no planning or topic to write about-just writing. i like it, good job.

[Cheyenne]

as usual i love it!! your wonderul!!!

[Chelsea.]

This is kinda all over the place, lol. If you wanted to do a rhyming poem, i think it you could turn it into one. Maybe erase the 'and' in the begining? Just my opinion, but it sounds better to me. I kinda started to re-word it ?


Don’t say that if I’m falling you’ll make everything okay,
We both know the truth, that this is just all a lie
I told you that I loved you, I can’t take it back
Wasted worthless words that will never be said back
,
it's changed a bit, but if you wanted you could use that.
That's if you wanted to keep it free verse.
Not sure, but good luck [: