Bottled Water.

Feelings. Not very good.

 

 

People act like I have a perfect life.

 

HAH! Yeah, that sounds nice.

 

It's like, I act so right.

But don't I look like I've been through a fight?

Write my past all over the world.

 

Not to brag, its nothing to adore!

I'm not proud, im not happy.

 

Words of hate, my world is crappy.

 

Out of place, I'm lost in the crowd.

I wanna be noticed, make my mom proud.

They say I've changed, but isn't that good?

I'm actually acting as I should.

 

Lost, confused, sad, undecided.

Life's an unopend book. I wish I was excited.

 

Author's Note

This is EXACTLY what I ws thinking all day yesterday.
? Not very good, kinda weak. But hey, just how i feel.
And the title DOSENT MEAN ANYTHING (: I just..was looking at a bottle of water for an hour while I wrote this.

Reviews

[quill of shadows]

i must disagree though iv seen ur quite capable of far superior work. i fail to see it as week though it laks some jucy words which im sher ur vocabulary contains but its still verry meeningful indeed and is verry relatable

[LittleMadGirl]

It has a disturbing rhythm =) nice one

[Keevan]

very intersting and well put.
great job! in teh library as a FAVORITE. :)

[Manda]

this was interesting. well done