I Love You

My FIRST NON RHYMING ONE(: Hope you like it?

I try, babe.

You just don't pay attention.

I say it all the time,

You just aren't in sight.

You have fallen for a new someone.

But I'm still here, aren't i?

I guess it's true then, I do love you.

Proof or not, I hope you see it.

It's in my eyes, that's what they say.

Not only in me, it's all around.

The looks of young lovers.

It's so inspiring.

I guess this is my way of saying,

I love you, and it's never changing.

 

 

 

Author's Note

I think it's good. Or okay. Ignore grammar.

Reviews

[biggle]

i like it, but i hate that feeling.

[Jean]

Saying and changing are half rhymes silly. :) Its not completely non rhyming, but I guess you can still look at it that way. Its really good anyways. :D This is a very cute poem. :)

[Undying Glory]

really sweet i think. but it definitely hurts to see the one you love, but they don't realise it. great poem

[AllyKinzz:)]

Its simple and to the point. I like it. It also shows some truth. I know what its like to have people say they can tell ones in love by the simple look in ones eyes. I also know what its like to have loved someone and have them love someone else. But in truth, this poem says it all. Without really saying much at all. :D

Mind reviewing back? :D