My Mother, my Godess

A dew drop from eyes
as a silent rise
from the little heart
as sweet as pies,
but no one can hear it
because of a little emotional bit,
which can be only heard by a mother 
in this benign weather
where there is all around darkness
and dead loneliness.

Pray to God to make him smile

but what can God do if mother is away mile. 

He cannot do what a mother can do.

A child knows his mother

but to god he asks

"Who are you?"

The mother is greater than God.

She is the child's lord.

No one can take place of her

because she is the MOTHER.

Reviews

[anindita]

Lovely poem! :)

[Mehul Rwat]

I like my mother...
Your poem makes me do that with even more devotion...
Absolutely nice...... Here's a nice word for your poem(and I say this only for a handful of poems) ::
SMASHING.

[jimmy]

beautiful

[deleted]

nothing is better than the love of a mother

[sugar]

i give this my two thumbs upp, good job

[Eric Cox]

Nice piece. I like it. Good pen upon this.

[rwar ish me]

Very nice write