My meaning of Love

My meaning of Love

A Poem by Lively
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Every heart has its own meaning of love. Love is same for parents, relatives, friends and companion. There is nothing like pain in love. Love is synonym of happiness.

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Love you for your deeds
Love you for your thoughts
Love you for your talks
And love you for all that is yours.

Loved you since the time I didn't even know you  
And loved you when I got to know you.

Loved you when we befriended
And loved you when we fought
for very strong is my love knot.

Loved you when I heard you love someone else
And my love made me support your decision myself.

My love is not to get
but to let
let you live your life at most
for a smile of yours 
I surrender all my happiness.
For you are most important to me 
and I sacrifice myself before thee.

Take my heart
take my soul
take me
and take my all.

Loved you when you got married
love is still there although our meetings are cherished.

You may go away 
but will remain always with me 
for your love made my life lively
and your company made it comely.

© 2011 Lively


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I really felt and relate to this. True love doesn't always have the happy fairytale ending, and this is a perfect description of one of the alternatives. I also completely agree that everyone has their own definition of love, based on their own beliefs and experiences. I love this piece.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really felt this poem. When you really care about a person and they're with someone else, you try not to be selfish and think about their best interest and just be happy for them. I can really relate because I'm coping with that with a person I'm friends with right now. It's like a struggle between being happy for him and thinking about what's happening in the friendship.

Posted 13 Years Ago


more optimistic than what i would've done, but that's what makes me like it better than what i would've done. tragedy breeds cynicism, but optimism eliminates cynicism, leaving room for a smile-the door back to happiness.

Posted 13 Years Ago


love this one its my fav..thats y u won

Posted 13 Years Ago


=]


Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazing song, my band mates and I reviewed it and we all loved it! That's why you won first place!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Happy and loving read =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Poem is good, but it lacks meter in some places.... yet a good one... keep writing..

Posted 13 Years Ago


:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on April 7, 2011
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