One more question:26/11

It's about the increasing hatred and man-to-man fight in our beautiful earth. One such incident is mentioned here. The poem reflects the cruelty of most generous invention of nature: Humans.

The day was more dark than night

Humans were more inhumane than beasts

What lost, not only were hundreds of lives but

also the hearts of their kith and kin

and trust of those who believe that peace always win.

Terrifying were both the sound and silence,

silence of death and sound of violence;

said one survivor.

It is easy , with two or three, to fight

but with one with gun, it always fright;

quoted the other.

We were not taking decisions,

 it was the time that took these for us, 

I don't posses any ill-will against these teenagers

with hatred who were squashed

and a little brain washed;

spoke the third agrieved.

Whatever the reason was behind this,

might of almighty or a play of reckless,

it was a question,

Will evil outweigh the goodness?

It made marks in bottom of hearts,

depth of souls and core of brains.

It was neither against me nor you,

rather it was a challange to humanity.

We need answers

 not from govt. but from ourselves.

What has happened, were we responsible in anyway???

Author's Note

It is not to harm anybody's emotions. It is just a description of some lively hearts and their emotions.

Reviews

[Lucy]

This is very talented! I hope you will keep writing!

Welcome to Writer's Cafe, Lively.

[Vaidehi]

Lots of questions.. wonder who has the answers... hmm..

[Coyote Poetry]

"We need answers
not from govt. but from ourselves."
In a world going crazy. Most people don't desire to know the truth. In Nazi Germany. The world turn away from a race. USA knew what was going on. Time for the real people to gather. Not allow false leaders and liars to control our mind and thoughts.
it was a question,
"Will evil outweigh the goodness?"
I like this poem. Made me think of many different things. That is the goal of a writer. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sukriti Suki]

I like the concept and the idea portrayed. Although I think the lines shouldn't be next to the image, it's a bit difficult to read. Also in the 2nd stanza, there should be some more clarity as to who is saying what..Otherwise I like this.