I loved the poem, you could perfectly do a rhyme here and it would sounded PERFECT if you did.
finding a person like that isn't hard, you just don't fake things, live up your life as you are and your second half will just show up front of you
keep up the good work
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank You so much for taking time to write me an review i would definitely try to add more rhymes i.. read moreThank You so much for taking time to write me an review i would definitely try to add more rhymes in my next poem.
Hello and welcome my world full of magic adventure love and friendship. I'm 16 and been writing poetry and stories for a while now and would love to share my writing. My inspiration mostly comes from .. more..