Who I Am

Who I Am

A Poem by Daliah Valley

Indie music and charcol sketches

happen to be

Just exactly what

express me.

 

I spend my free time

drawing my mood.

And pondering life

while eating food.

 

If could show you life

through my eyes

You would see off-white petals

and striped ties.

 

You'd see waterfalls

and faes.

And stupid little things

and dark plays.

 

I spend my time

wishing to be

in a darkalleyway

and expressing me.

 

Indie music and charcol paintings

happen to be

just what show the world

me.

© 2012 Daliah Valley


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I'm sorry but your title also happens to be the name of my favorite song from "Les Mis" so my expectations were probably a little high. You didn't quite meet them. In spite of this, you did rather well with what it seems you set out to do. One thing that is currently bugging me is that fae is plural. Faes is not a real word. Other than that, good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Daliah Valley

12 Years Ago

Haha sorry. I didn't even know that was a song. I didn't really set out to do much; my poems tend to.. read more

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Daliah Valley
Daliah Valley

New Martinsville, WV



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I could write something incredibly dull about my name and age and stuff, but I won't, since that isn't very fun to read. :P Fun fact one: I can't eat more than one bowl of ice cream. Fun fact t.. more..

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